I think I am one of those people who need an hour or two on that running machine! I liked your piece allot it kept my attention throughout the whole thing. The sound of you in the beginning of your piece running on the machine and out of breath was amazing, I think that is what got my full attention. You have an amazing voice for story telling, I loved it! Did you ever answer that question in the beginning about why you are the only one on the running machine? Also your story focuses on one tiny part of why people are overweight, but I think its more then just exercising and finding new ways to approach it. In this world people are overweight for a number of reasons so many people are emotional eaters, and also some people just don't know the right foods to eat! You mention the health problems with obesity or being overweight that too, was a very small tiny-inzy-binzy list! I totally understand why you couldn't mention all the health problems related with obesity but a quick word saying that ?some of the health risks with obesity are........?, would make a difference, letting the listeners know there is more. In your story you focused on African Americans, are you African American? When doing a story you have to make sure you paint the full picture an obvious traits like being black can make the story take a different stand point so you have to make sure you MENTION all of the important details in a very creative way. Besides all of that, your story KICKED BUTT!
We liked the directness of the narrator and the way she got expert opinions to back up her ideas. The introduction of this piece is very original and the sound effects help drive the story. We think a lot of people will be able to relate to this story.
Obesity is a very "touchy" subject in today's youth, especially American youth. "Why am I the only one here?" brings humor to the dreaded question of: Why aren’t there more obese teenagers in the gym? The narrator makes use of the statistics gathered without causing the youth audience to fall dead in their tracks for listening to a broken record. The story’s structure is well put and informative. In all, the humorous intro and outro, the strong structure, and the interviewees make this piece one to be heard by everyone in our generation.
Smart and sassy. I really enjoyed this piece. Its strongest aspect is that the narrator has a lot of personality, and, importantly, she allows for the personalities of her interviewees to come across marvelously too. The best line I have heard in a long time is when Jennifer asks, "Can you define badonkadonk for me?" This line of questioning is consistent throughout, where instead of asking the generic question of "What do you think about obesity and youth?" she poses the question "What does obesity mean to *you*?" In this way she constructs a polished piece that thoughtfully explores the social meanings of youth obesity.
Jennifer covers an impressive amount of ground in less than 4 minutes, but I think this piece would be improved by having more depth in the section on the causes of obesity. She begins to go here when she includes the doctor's comments on the "evolutionary advantages" of excess weight. Yet, obesity is much more than genetic background. There is much left to be explored here, such as the socio-economic causes of obesity and how they factor into the ways in which obesity is tackled. That said, it was very enjoyable as a whole and it was great being introduced to all of those characters.
Obesity starts out with Jennifer Rowe (the narrator and producer) running on a treadmill, giving her voice a panted, jolted sound, I love the piece already! Starting with such an unusual intro makes the rest of the piece a joy to listen to. The commentary takes a huge issue that is sweeping America and turns the concern of obesity into a personal matter between Jennifer and her friends. Jennifer combines short, interesting, personal, interviews with facts that apply to the whole country. Her sense of humor about obesity mixed with some quite frightening facts adds to a nice mix of feelings from the listener about obesity.
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Rocky Tayeh
Posted on December 30, 2005 at 12:23 PM | Permalink
Review of Obesity
I think I am one of those people who need an hour or two on that running machine! I liked your piece allot it kept my attention throughout the whole thing. The sound of you in the beginning of your piece running on the machine and out of breath was amazing, I think that is what got my full attention. You have an amazing voice for story telling, I loved it! Did you ever answer that question in the beginning about why you are the only one on the running machine? Also your story focuses on one tiny part of why people are overweight, but I think its more then just exercising and finding new ways to approach it. In this world people are overweight for a number of reasons so many people are emotional eaters, and also some people just don't know the right foods to eat! You mention the health problems with obesity or being overweight that too, was a very small tiny-inzy-binzy list! I totally understand why you couldn't mention all the health problems related with obesity but a quick word saying that ?some of the health risks with obesity are........?, would make a difference, letting the listeners know there is more. In your story you focused on African Americans, are you African American? When doing a story you have to make sure you paint the full picture an obvious traits like being black can make the story take a different stand point so you have to make sure you MENTION all of the important details in a very creative way. Besides all of that, your story KICKED BUTT!
Banlon 1964
Posted on December 27, 2005 at 12:40 AM | Permalink
Review of Obesity
Very interesting piece about African-American teenage girls and being overweight. Some interesting comments by doctors and by teenagers themselves.
Kids of CAT
Posted on November 02, 2005 at 07:12 AM | Permalink
Review of Obesity
We liked the directness of the narrator and the way she got expert opinions to back up her ideas. The introduction of this piece is very original and the sound effects help drive the story. We think a lot of people will be able to relate to this story.
Carlos Maeda
Posted on September 30, 2005 at 01:25 PM | Permalink
Review of Obesity
Obesity is a very "touchy" subject in today's youth, especially American youth. "Why am I the only one here?" brings humor to the dreaded question of: Why aren’t there more obese teenagers in the gym? The narrator makes use of the statistics gathered without causing the youth audience to fall dead in their tracks for listening to a broken record. The story’s structure is well put and informative. In all, the humorous intro and outro, the strong structure, and the interviewees make this piece one to be heard by everyone in our generation.
Kiera Feldman
Posted on August 30, 2005 at 07:49 PM | Permalink
Review of Obesity
Smart and sassy. I really enjoyed this piece. Its strongest aspect is that the narrator has a lot of personality, and, importantly, she allows for the personalities of her interviewees to come across marvelously too. The best line I have heard in a long time is when Jennifer asks, "Can you define badonkadonk for me?" This line of questioning is consistent throughout, where instead of asking the generic question of "What do you think about obesity and youth?" she poses the question "What does obesity mean to *you*?" In this way she constructs a polished piece that thoughtfully explores the social meanings of youth obesity.
Jennifer covers an impressive amount of ground in less than 4 minutes, but I think this piece would be improved by having more depth in the section on the causes of obesity. She begins to go here when she includes the doctor's comments on the "evolutionary advantages" of excess weight. Yet, obesity is much more than genetic background. There is much left to be explored here, such as the socio-economic causes of obesity and how they factor into the ways in which obesity is tackled. That said, it was very enjoyable as a whole and it was great being introduced to all of those characters.
Adrian Boyes
Posted on August 27, 2005 at 09:06 AM | Permalink
Review of Obesity
Obesity starts out with Jennifer Rowe (the narrator and producer) running on a treadmill, giving her voice a panted, jolted sound, I love the piece already! Starting with such an unusual intro makes the rest of the piece a joy to listen to. The commentary takes a huge issue that is sweeping America and turns the concern of obesity into a personal matter between Jennifer and her friends. Jennifer combines short, interesting, personal, interviews with facts that apply to the whole country. Her sense of humor about obesity mixed with some quite frightening facts adds to a nice mix of feelings from the listener about obesity.