Comments for Melvin is Dead

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Produced by Sally Richardson

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Summary: First-person response to a surprising phone message from my brother about my old dog Melvin.
 

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Review of Melvin is Dead

Hilarious and witty sound postcard on the loss of a family pet who's older than God.

Great first effort and I encourage more entries.

Writing is personal and her delivery is at times a bit fast but very conversational.

Sound of phone calls need to be boosted and clearer as it can be distracting, but you get the essence.

Love the ending!

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Review of Melvin is Dead

In this debut piece, Sally uses the death of her dog Melvin to reflect on her life. This first-person narrative is peppered with witty metaphors and has an excellent flow, anchored by memories of Melvin.

Although the bookend actuals are hard to hear at normal volume levels, Sally's delivery is clear and warm. She talks to the audience like she is talking to a good friend, rather than simply reading the script into a microphone.

There's a twist ending, but I won't spoil it.