Piece Comment

Review of The Power of Education in one girls life in India

The piece cut off before it was finished, which was frustrating, because I very much wanted to hear more. From what is written about the piece, I realize that there is a happy -- or happier -- ending ahead. But even without knowing that, I wanted to hear how the story "turned out".
Any piece that deals with the position of women in India is important to air. India is the world's second most populous country, and the subordinate position of women has dark implications for development, poverty, population issues, as well as social justice issues, that impact not only India but all of us on this little planet. A feature that shows some hope on the horizon is also welcome.
The writing and tone were good -- I would only suggest a smoother, more rapid translation and editing out a little of the original language (not all).