Piece Comment

Review of Dads


What a nice, surprisingly sad piece. I went away feeling a bit scared to become a father, especially after hearing one woman's story of her creative, fun dad who one day left forever. I was struck by the snippets about these distant men, and how despite the differences they almost blend into a single narrative. Maybe it is because a close, happy relationship doesn't make a good story, that the darkness came to the foreground in this piece.

Strucurally, the movement from the opening montage of shorter clips to longer ones works well, and the closing quote is a nice touch that works as an explanation for the lack of depth in any one story. The closing music sounded great; it would be welcome throughout the piece, possibly replacing the repeteded interviewer questions which, after the first batch, we could infer from the answers.

Thank you for these stories!