Not a bad piece. The story was well told with all the listener's questions eventually answered. The character telling the story had good storytelling technique (or was that clever editing?) and caputured the in's and out's of the online gaming society well.
Some minor crit:
The music and sound effects (or were all the R2-D2 bits in the music?) were a little forced, and seemed to be too much in the foreground. The commentator could (possibly) help the story along by changing the tone of comment to a more comedic, amused, or even creeped out role, rather than the "just the facts" kind of reporting style used.