Piece Comment

Review of Need income? Take temp assignments. Yeah, right.


Jackman has a nice voice and delivery. This story took a little while to catch my interest, but the eloquent descriptions of the workplace eventually drew me into the story. This work reminds me somewhat of comedian Josh Kornbluth, who draws attention to the inanities of dull labor. I think some change-ups in pacing... perhaps a moment here... an elongated word there... would help this piece along. In the end, I feel it's a nice little meditation on temp labor.