This is a very unusual and humorous piece. The concept straddles the line between believable and unbelievable. This straddling kept me listening; i wanted to know where the story was going to go next. Also, the interviews well well placed and well conceived.
The two strongest points for this piece are originality and thread of narrative. I liked how the writer "lead" me from the initial discovery through to the eventual understanding of the chain of events. Since this is fiction, the writer had to work that much harder.
Review of Whistling Kettle News
Daniel Ogawa
Posted on March 31, 2005 at 01:59 PM
This is a very unusual and humorous piece. The concept straddles the line between believable and unbelievable. This straddling kept me listening; i wanted to know where the story was going to go next. Also, the interviews well well placed and well conceived.
The two strongest points for this piece are originality and thread of narrative. I liked how the writer "lead" me from the initial discovery through to the eventual understanding of the chain of events. Since this is fiction, the writer had to work that much harder.
This is a truly original and funny piece.